Ironlung
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 Its a nice series of shots to start you off but please dont be put off by my cririque of your shots as its the only way to learn.
That looks like you got some great weather in turkey.I would maybe crop the image in a little from the right to get rid of the branches trying to get into your shot.I like the atmosphere in this shot.
The shot of your little sister is an excellent shot,Good composition on this one.Though I would crop it up a little from the bottom and in a little from the left so the emphasis is on her face.She is a natural model which is great as its hard to practice portraiture as most people are camera shy.It is a little out of focus but dont worry about that all my shots were the same when I first started.P.S.......Is she single.. 
I absolutly love the third one,all the lights and people in the backround are out of focus and smudged all over the place while the...ahem,rather attractive girls in the middle are sharp.Excellent shot and I think you should try it im black and white.
I like the last shot also.The high viewpoint is cool,its a pity you didnt get great weather though.Try beefing up the contrast a little to see If you can bring out some detail.
A big thumbs up for your first shots.
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